“It’s a crummy commercial?”*
Oh Ralphie, I feel your pain. I do. It struck me as odd that the cover didn’t show the author’s name, so I hoped to find it at the end. What I found was a bunch of links to his/her/hir hypnosis products. *long sigh*
I don’t feel this writer is ready to be published, and pointing out specific examples of why strikes me as cruel, so I’ll leave it at that.